Reminds me of my college days (humorous poetry)

[sajjad]

Main Aur mere roommates
aksar Yeh Baatain Karte Hain
Ghar saaf hota to kaisa hota
Main kitchen saaf karta,tum bathrooom dhote
main hall saaf karta, tum balcony dekhte

Log is baat pe hairaan hote
aur us baat pe haste....
Main aur mere roommates ,
aksar Yeh Baatain Karte Hain

Yeh hara bhara sink hai
ya bartanon ki jung chirri hui hai
Yeh colour full kitchen hai
ya masalon se holi kheli hai

Hai farsh ki nayi design
ya doodh, beer se dhuli hui hain
Yeh cellphone hai ya *******,
sleeping bag ya kisika aanchal,

ye airfreshner ka naya flavour hai,
ya trash bag se ati badboo
Yeh pattiyon ki hai sarsarahut
ke heater phirse kharab hua hai

Yeh sonchta hain roommate kab se gum sum -
Ke jab ke usko bhi yeh khabar hai
Ke machar nahi hai, kaheen nahi hai
magar uska dil hai ke kah raha hai
machar yaheen hai, yaheen kaheen hai !

Toand ( pait, stomach ) ki ye haalat, meri bhi hai, uski bhi,
dil mein ek tasvir idhar bhi hai, udhar bhi
Karne ko bohot kuch hai magar kab kare hum
Kab tak yoon hi is tarah rahe hum

Dil kahta hai Safeway se koi vaccum cleaner la de
ye Carpet jo marnta ja raha hai, phikwa de

Hum saaf rahe sakte hai, logon ko bata dain,
Haan hum roommates hai - roommates hai - roommates hai
Ab dil main yehi baaaat, idhar bhi hai udhar bhi......
Sab ko bata dain........

[Schiller]

this reminds me of
duzun duzun duzun ;-)
(or you could spell it as dozen dozen dozen but not dozen as in 12)

if youve lived in karachi, you should know for sure

[sajjad]

i have two duzon's in mind
with the mention of khi it probably means the word kill

if true
how does that relate to duzon duzon....
if not
*** is duzon

[Hussain]

nice piece of poetry
this thread desrves to be reserructed

[nadeem]

:)) :)) :)) :)) :)) :D> :D> :D> :D> :D> :D> Very good very good.

[Officer Barbrady]

Sajjad is/was a good poster. Returned to Pak a month or so back and I guess hasn't had a chance to log in yet.

[MIG]

I was wondering where he is now ? Would be an ideal candidate for newcomer award ( hint hint)

[Officer Barbrady]

He mentioned he was moving back to Pak. Mig, he joined in Dec 2004 according to the list !

[MIG]

New enough - as this is the first awards , we can make a few exceptions....

[Hussain]

Sajjad: My nomination for the Award

[octavian]

duzen duzen, is a landmark even outside of KHI :))2

Lot of ppl take cerdit for it. i wonder who was the original author. That genius mind.

[Schiller]

duzen duzen was something else i must say :))2
so its known in lahore too?

"first year ki..."

:))2 :

[octavian]

yep its even known in Pindi and Isl too. I am amazed at that too.

[Schiller]

well well, thats famous, ofcourse it deserves it too,
we were going for our regular ncc fire shooting drill in first yr and in the van this guy read this out to us and we made such a hoot, the driver got pissed at us and said I wont drive you guys, youe this and that and I thought adamjeeans were good guys :))2

then the guy who had read it out, said to him, yar baba jee damagh nahin kharab karo aur gaari chalao, aajatay hain :))2

[octavian]

yaar those NCc days are so carzily hillarious.

there was another poetic masterpiece that some guy read in our NCC thingy. That was pretty wicked too. I cant even begin to describe its name.

[Schiller]

ncc was the best time ive ever had in college :))2

[octavian]

yaar waisay Army guys have the life in Pak. no work and live like royal family.

I hate that.

[Hussain]

here is where urdu scores over english
in urdu we can have light literature like majahiya afsanay, mazahiya mazmoon ,shairi

while these things are not as developed in english