Bait Baazi

[dukki_badshah]

hi guysss...

i am new on this forum n getting myself use to it..i am a big fan of urdu bait bazi so i thought why not start my first thread of bait bazii n know u guys more...so i will start first


ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se
Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta hai

whos next

[ShehryarK]

Welcome to PP :)

Have moved this thread to the Languages Forum - hopefully our resident shu'ara (aka nakaam ushaaq) can join you :)

[ShehryarK]

so i will start first


ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se
Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta hai

Hai...assuming its Urdu, means we need something starting with 'yay'....

"yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota...
kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."

[Female Cricketer]

Hai...assuming its Urdu, means we need something starting with 'yay'....

"yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota...
kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."
it means i have to ssay something with A right?...
Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile...
Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..

[Momo]

"yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota...
kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."
Ye na thhi hamaari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota
Agar aur jeete rehte yehi intazaar hota

Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile...
Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..
Ab ke hum bichhre to shayad kabhi khwaabon mein milen
Jis tarah sookhe huwe phhool kitaabon mein milen

:)

[Momo]

Noon

Na thha kuchh to khuda thha, kuchh na hota to khuda hota
Duboya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota

Alif

[ZAK]

Alif Allah chambe di booti murshid man wich lai hoo
nafi asbaat da paani milya har jaga har jai hoo

Wow

[Momo]

Wo firaaq aur wo wisaal kahaan
Wo shab-o-roz-o-maah-o-saal kahaan

Noon

[ZAK]

Nahi aati jo yaad unki to barso tak nahi aati
magar jab yaad aatain hain to aksar yaad aatay hain

Noon

[dukki_badshah]

na tha kuchch to KHuda tha, kuchch na hota to KHuda hota
duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota

Aliff

[dukki_badshah]

sorry didnt notice the that was already posted so here i go again

Na shikasta qalb hote na firaaq-e-yaar hota
Gar haami-e-mohabbat parwardigaar hota

its alif again

[d0gers]

ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se
Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta haiIs this even a shair? Sounds more like the intro to Neelam Ghar:

"Ibtida hay rab-e-jalil ke ba-barkat naam say, jo dilon ke bhaid khoob janta hai. Dekhti aankhon, suntay kaanon, aap ko Shabana, Farzana aur Tariq Aziz ka salaam pohanchay."

[d0gers]

sorry didnt notice the that was already posted so here i go again

Na shikasta qalb hote na firaaq-e-yaar hota
Gar haami-e-mohabbat parwardigaar hota

its alif againAshk aankhon mein kab nahin aata
Lahu aata hay jab nahin aata

Alif

[ZAK]

Aa gaye tum to jafaoon ka qalaq yaad nahi
dil voh baccha hai jise pehla sabaq yaad nahi

Yay

[d0gers]

'Nahin' ends in Noon, not Yay...

Nishan-e-rah dikhatay thay jo sitaaron ko
Taras gaye hein kisi mard-e-rahdaan kay liay

Yay

[Momo]

Ye masaail-e-tasawwuf, ye tera bayaan Ghaalib
Tujhe hum wali samajhte jo na baada khaar hota

Alif

[Momo]

Forgive me for getting off track but
"Ibtida hay rab-e-jalil ke ba-barkat naam say, jo dilon ke bhaid khoob janta hai. Dekhti aankhon, suntay kaanon, aap ko Shabana, Farzana aur Tariq Aziz ka salaam pohanchay."
:)))

[Khabri420]

Pardon my ignorance...but are we playing a version of Antakshari? :inzi

[Momo]

Aakhir hamaari khelne koodne ki umar hai. :afridi

[dukki_badshah]

i think its kind of Antakshari..

app ko deakh ker deakhta reh gayah,
kia kahoon our kehnay ko kai rah gaya

Alif

[Momo]

Un ki aankhon se kaese chhalakne laga
Mere honton pe jo maajara reh gaya

:D

Alif

[ZAK]

Ab keh tajdeed-e-wafa ka nahin imkan janan
yad kya tujh ko dilain tera paiman janan

Alif

[d0gers]

^ZAK Mian aap ko Noon say kya dushmani hay? :D

Nigah-e-faqr mein shaan-e-sikandari kya hay
Khiraaj ki jo gada ho woh qaisari kya hay

Yay

[ZAK]

^ZAK Mian aap ko Noon say kya dushmani hay? :D

Nigah-e-faqr mein shaan-e-sikandari kya hay
Khiraaj ki jo gada ho qoh qaisari kya hay

Yay

Mujhay noon say koi dushmani nahin dogar sahib asal dushmani mairu to is noon ghuna kay sath hai lakin Inshallah aainda is qism ki bay ihtyati waqu pazeer nahi ho gi :P

[ZAK]

Yay kon ghazal khuwan hai pur sozo nishat angaiz
andaisha-e-dana ko karta hai junoo aamaiz

[Momo]

Zindagi apni jab is shakl se guzri Ghaalib
Hum bhi kya yaad karein ge ke khuda rakhte thhe!

Yay

[ZAK]

Yay dil yay pagal dil mera kyon bujh gaya aawargi
is dasht mein ik shahar tha vo kya hua aawargi

Yay

[d0gers]

Ye baatein jhooti baatein hein, jo logon ne phelai hein
Tum Insha ji ka naam na lo, kya Insha ji saudai hein

Noon

[Zechariah]

Na shikwa hai koi na koi gila hai
Salaamat rahe tu yeh meri dua hai

Yay

[Fawad_Bhai]

oooh...so this is like Antakhshari..if yes then here i will try to continue
i am too young for this game though..too boring for me :P

Anyway,

Yeh hasta huwa chaand, yeh pur noor sitaarey
Tabinda o Painda hain zar-ron k sahaaray

[d0gers]

Ok please... this is not like Antakshari.... Antakshari is like bait baazi.

Kal ke bachay.... :P

[Fawad_Bhai]

Ok please... this is not like Antakshari.... Antakshari is like bait baazi.

Kal ke bachay.... :P


u mean Kal ke jawaan :akhtar

Aaj ke bachey :aamir

and one question...how do you pronounce this? is it (Bay-Uth-Baazi) or (baith Baazi)

and the shair i used, was it used correctly? :ibutt

[Momo]

Yaad thheen hum ko bhi ranga rang bazm aaraaiyaan
Lekin ab naqsh-o-nigaar-e-taaq-e-nisyaan ho gayeen

Noon

[d0gers]

Na ho nomeed, nomeedi zawal-e-ilm-o-irfan hay
Umeed-e-mard-e-momin hay Khuda ke raazdaanon mein

Noon

[Momo]

Naveed-e-amn hai bedaad-e-dost jaan ke liye
Rahi na tarz-e-sitam koi aasmaan ke liye

Yay

[ZAK]

Ya Rab dill-e-Muslim ko wo zinda tamana day
jo qalb ko garma day jo rooh ko tarpa day

Yay

[d0gers]

Ye jo deewane se do char nazar aatay hein
In mein kuch sahib-e-israr nazar aatey hein

Noon

[Momo]

Naheen ke mujh ko qayaamat ka aetaqaad naheen
Shab-e-firaaq se roz-e-jaza zeyaad naheen

Noon

[ZAK]

Nahin tera nasheman Qasr-e-Sultani ke gumbad par
tu shaheen hai basera kar paharoun ke chatanoun par

[d0gers]

^ That ends as "Tu shaheen hai basera kar paharoun ki chatanoun mein

So Noon again :D

Nigah buland sukhan dil nawaz jaan pursoz
Yehi hay rakht-e-safar mir-e-karavaan kay liay

Yay

[Momo]

Ye kahaan ki dosti hai ke bane hain dost naaseh
Koi chaara saaz hota, koi gham gusaar hota

Alif

[d0gers]

Aata hay yaad mujh ko guzra hua zamana
Woh bagh ki baharain woh sab ka chehchahana

Alif

[ZAK]

Iqbal bara updeshak hai, mann baton main mo leta hai
Guftar ka ye ghazi tou bana, kirdar ka ghazi ban na saka

Alif

[Momo]

Aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
Kaun jeeta hai teri zulf ke sar hone tak

Kaaf (kutte waala :)) )

[d0gers]

Khilen gi kaliyan banein ge ghunchay sajay gi phoolon ki sej lekin
Kia tha aanay ka jis ne waada wohi na aaya tou kya karo ge

Yay

[ZAK]

Yay khoon ki mehak hai kai lab-e-yaar ki khusboo
kis rah ki janib say saba aati hai daikho

Wow

[Momo]

Wafa kaesi, kahaan ka ishq, jab sar phorna thehra
To phir, ae sangdil, tera hi sang-e-aastaan kioon ho

Wow

[ZAK]

Wo jo hum main tum main qarar tha, tumhain yaad ho kay na yaad ho
wohi yaani wada nibah ka, tumhay yaad ho kay na yaad ho

Wow

[Momo]

Waaye gar mera tera insaaf mehshar mein na ho
Ab talak to ye tawaqqo hai ke waan ho jaaye ga

Alif

[ZAK]

Ibnay Maryam huwa karay koi
Mairay dukh ki dwa karay koi

Yay

[Momo]

Yun hi gar rota raha Ghaalib to ae ahle-e-jahaan
Dekhna in bastion ko tum ke weetaan ho gayeen

Noon

[ZAK]

Nuqta cheen hai gham-e-dil uss ko sunai na banay
kya banay baat, jahan baat banai na banay

Yay

[d0gers]

Ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaye
Woh but hay ya khuda dekha na jaye

Yay

[ZAK]

Ye jo sargushta say phirtay hain kitabon walay
In say mat mil kay inhay rog hain khwabon walay

Yay

[Momo]

Ye laash-e be-kafan Asad-e khasta jaan ki hai
Haq maghfirat kare ajab aazaad mard thha

Alif

[d0gers]

Uth kar tou aa gaye hein teri bazm se magar
Kuch dil hi jaanta hai ke kis dil se aaye hein

Noon

[Momo]

Na gul-e-naghma hoon, na parda-e-saaz
Main hoon apni shikast ki aawaaz

Zay

[insaaniyat]

it means i have to ssay something with A right?...
Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile...
Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..

aajkal kitaab parhta kaun hai:)

[insaaniyat]

Na gul-e-naghma hoon, na parda-e-saaz
Main hoon apni shikast ki aawaaz

Zay

Zahid sharaab peenay de masjid main baith kar
ya woj jagha bata, jahan par khuda na ho

hay

[d0gers]

Zahid sharaab peenay de masjid main baith kar
ya woj jagha bata, jahan par khuda na ho

hayNahin yaar.. Wow.. not hay. Last letter of the last word, not first letter of the last word.

Woh naye gilay woh shikayatein woh mazay mazay ki hikayatein
Woh har ek baat pe roothna tumhein yaad ho ke na yaad ho

Wow

[Momo]

Waa hasrata ke yaar ne khencha sitam se haath
Hum ko harees-e-lazzat-e-aazaar dekh kar

Ray

[d0gers]

Rahay ga Ravi-o-Neel-o-Faraat mein kab tak
Tera safina ke hay behr-e-bekaraan ke liay

Yay

[Momo]

Ya rab wo na samjhe hain, na samjhein ge meri baat
De aur dil un ko, jo na de mujh ko zubaan aur

Ray

[ace4rmspace]

Rahey marz-e-gham mein too mubtila, na davaa milley na shifa milley
Jo qazaa ki ho tujhey aarzoo teri umrr aur daraaz ho

Vao

[dhump]

vahin hain dil kai qrain tama kehtay hain
woh ik khalish kay jisay tera nam kehtay hain

YaY

[Momo]

Ye rashk hai ke wo hota hai hamsukhan tum se
Waqarna khauf-e-bad aamozi-e-adu kya hai

Yay

[ace4rmspace]

Yeh jo deewaaney se do chaar nazar aatey hain
In mein kuch Sahib-e-Israar nazar aatey hain

Noon

[dhump]

nasiha dil main tu itna to samajh apne k hum
lakh nadan huye, kya tujh say bhi nadan honge

YaY

[dhump]

Momo apnai apni woh post to ghayab hi kardi jismai apka shair ray par Khatam ho raha tha :(

[Momo]

Momo apnai apni woh post to ghayab hi kardi jismai apka shair ray par Khatam ho raha tha :(
Because you beat me to it by a few milliseconds. Now I have to start from Yay.

We have a strictly one sher policy. :)

[ace4rmspace]

Yazdaan ne muskuraa ke bardee dair mein likha
Ik lafz "Arzoo" merey dil ke kitaab mein

Koi baat nahi dhump sahib, Noon lejiyey ...

[Momo]

Na lut-ta din ko to kab raat ko yun be-khabar sota
Raha na khatka chori ka duaa deta hoon rahzan ko

Wow

[dhump]

Ace sahab momo bazi le gaye is bar aur hum lunch kartay reh gaye.

woh rat be-panah thi aur mai ghareeb tha
woh jisnai yeh charagh jalaya ajeeb tha

Alif

[ace4rmspace]

Ae zindagi ik baar too nazdeeq aa tanha hoon mein
Ya door se phir de mujhey koi sadaa tanha hoon mein

Noon

Waisey agar yaaroon ki tabah-e-naazuk pe giraan na guzrey to hakeer is band ko mukammil karney ki gustakhi kiyey ja raha hai, maazrat ka khaastgaar hoon ...

Duniya ki mehfil mein kahein mein hoon bhi shaid ya nahi
Ik umrr se is soch mein dooba huwa tanha hoon mein

[dhump]

Bohot khoob janab.

naye dais ka rung naya tha
dharti sai akash mila tha

sochta hon pehli barish bhi mukamal kardon :D par phir kabhi sahi.

Alif

[ZAK]

Un say nain mila kay daikho
Yay dokha bhi kha kay daikho

Wow

[Momo]

Wo aaye ghar mein hamaare, khuda ki qudrat hai
Kabhi hum un ko kabhi apne ghar ko dekhte hain

Noon

[d0gers]

Yeh jo deewaaney se do chaar nazar aatey hain
In mein kuch Sahib-e-Israar nazar aatey hain

NoonAhem... *cough* post #37 *cough*.

[d0gers]

Na woh ishq mein rahin garmiyan na woh husn mein rahin shokhian
Na woh Ghaznavi mein tarap rahi na woh kham hay zulf-e-Ayaz mein

Noon

[Momo]

Nafas na anjuman-e-aarzoo se baahar khhench
Agar sharaab naheen, intazaar-e-saaghar khhench

Chay

[dhump]

Nafas na anjuman-e-aarzoo se baahar khhench
Agar sharaab naheen, intazaar-e-saaghar khhench

Chay


Chand dekha teri ankhon mai na honto pe shafaq
milti julti hai shab-e-ghum sai teri deed abkay

YAY

[d0gers]

Ye meray saath kaisi roshni hay
Ke mujh se raasta dekha na jaye

Yay

[insaaniyat]

Ye meray saath kaisi roshni hay
Ke mujh se raasta dekha na jaye

Yay

yaad-e-maazi azaab hai ya-rab
cheen le mujh se haafzaa mera

alif?

[d0gers]

yaad-e-maazi azaab hai ya-rab
cheen le mujh se haafzaa mera

alif?

na thaa kuch tou khuda thaa, kuch na hota tou khud hota
duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, na hotaa main tou kiya hotaa

alif?Yes, Alif in both cases. But you only need to respond to the last 'outstanding' shair. Also the 2nd shair has already been used in this thread. Twice :D

Utha na sheesha giran-e-farang ke ehsaan
Sifal-e-Hind se meena-o-jaam paida kar

Ray

[Momo]

Rone se aur ishq mein bebaak ho gaye
Dhoye gaye hum aise ke bas paak ho gaye

Yay

[Momo]

you only need to respond to the last 'outstanding' shair.
All participants, please note the above. This is bait baazi, not kabootar baazi or any other kind of baazi. :yk

[ace4rmspace]

Ahem... *cough* post #37 *cough*.

Oh err ... but that was such a long time ago!

(Sorry, I didn't see it, my bad!)

[ace4rmspace]

Yeh kaun laug andheiroon ki baat kartey hain
Abhi to chaand teri yaad ke dhalley bhi nahi

Noon janaab

[Momo]

Naqsh faryaadi hai kis ki shokhi-e-tehreer ka
Kaaghazi hai pairahan har paikar-e-tasweer ka

Alif

[dhump]

ahl-e-dil kai darmian thay meer tum
ab sukhan hay shobdakaron kai bech

Chay

[ace4rmspace]

Chaoon mein baithney waaley hi to sab se pehley
Paird girta hai to aa jaatey hain aarey le kar

Ray

[Momo]

Raat din gardish mein hain saat aasmaan
Ho rahe ga kuchh na kuchh ghabraayen kya

Alif

[ace4rmspace]

Us ne jalti huwi paishaani pe jab haath rakha
Rooh tak a gai taaseer Maseehayee ki

Yay

[Momo]

Ye fitna aadmi ki khaana weerani ko kya kam hai
Hu-e tum dost jis ke, dushman us ka aasmaan kioon ho

Wow

[ace4rmspace]

Woh kaheen bhi gaya, lauta to merey paas aya
Bas yehi baat hai achi merey harjai ki

Yay

[ZAK]

.

[ace4rmspace]

.

Bohat acha "Nukta" uthaya hai Zak Sahib.

[ZAK]

Bohat acha "Nukta" uthaya hai Zak Sahib.

Aadab :P

[ZAK]

Yay tabiyat hai to khud aazar ban ja'ain gay hum
Chara gar royain gay or ghum khwar ban ja'ain gay hum

Meem

[ace4rmspace]

Merey shauk da nahi aitebaar teinoon, aja vaikh mera intezaar aja
Ainvein larrann bahaanrey labhna ein, keh toon sochna ein sitamgaar aja

Alif

[insaaniyat]

Yes, Alif in both cases. But you only need to respond to the last 'outstanding' shair. Also the 2nd shair has already been used in this thread. Twice :D

Utha na sheesha giran-e-farang ke ehsaan
Sifal-e-Hind se meena-o-jaam paida kar

Ray

thank you yaar.

[Looney]

Alif

Ulti hogayee'n sab tadbeeraii'n kuch dawa ne na kaam kiya
Dekhaa is bemaari-e-dil ne aakhir kaam tamaam kiya

Alif again :D

[d0gers]

Abhi tou tanqeed ho rahi hay meray mazaaq-e-junoon pe lekin
Tumhari zulfon ki barhami ka sawaal aaya tou kya karo ge

Yay

[Looney]

Yay

Yeh aur baat teri gali mei'n na aaye hum
Lekin yeh kia ke tera shehar chor jaaye'n hum

Meem

[ZAK]

Main us ka dost hoon wo aitraaf karta tha
Magar wo batain bhi mairay khilaaf karta tha

Alif

[Looney]

Insha ji utho ab kooch karo is shehar mai'n ji ko lagana kia
Wehshi ko sukoo'n se kia matlab jogi ka nagar mai'n thikana kia

Alif

[d0gers]

Is dil ke dareeda daaman mein dekho tou sahih socho tou sahih
Jis jholi mein sau chaid huay us jholi ka pehlana kia

I get 25 points for continuation :D

Alif

[Looney]

^haha it is one of my favorites :D

Ae khaak-e-nashino'n uth baitho woh waqt qareeb aan pohancha hai
Jab takht giraye jaaye'n ge jab taj uchaale jaaye'n ge
Ab toot girai'n gi zanjeerai'n ab zindano'n ki khair nahi
Jo darya jhoom ke uthay hai'n tinko'n se na taalay jaaye'n ge :Zardari

Yay

[dhump]

Yahan to jazbiyat bhi hai dolat he ki parwarda
Ye larki faqaqash hoti to badsoorat nazar ati

YaY

[Looney]

Yeh jo hum hijr mai'n diwaar-o-dar ko dekhte hai'n
Kabhi saba ko kabhi naamaabar ko dekhte hai'n
Woh aaye humare ghar mai'n Khuda ki qudrat hai
Kabhi hum un ko kabhi apne ghar ko dekhte hai'n

Noon

[Momo]

A slight correction:

Yeh hum jo hijr mai'n diwaar-o-dar ko dekhte hai'n
Kabhi saba ko kabhi naamaabar ko dekhte hai'n
Woh aaye ghar mai'n hamaare, Khuda ki qudrat hai
Kabhi hum un ko kabhi apne ghar ko dekhte hai'n

Na tum aaye na shab-e-intazaar guzri hai
Talaash mein hai sehar, baar baar guzri hai

Yay

[insaaniyat]

A slight correction:



Na tum aaye na shab-e-intazaar guzri hai
Talaash mein hai sehar, baar baar guzri hai

Yay

Yaad rakho tou dil ke paas hun main
bhool jaa-o tou faasle hain bahot

tey
ت

[d0gers]

Tu rahnawarde shauq hay manzil na kar qubool
Laila bhi humnasheen ho tou mehmil na kar qubool

Laam

[Looney]

@Momo: thanks bro

Lab pe aati hai dua ban ke tamanna meri
Zindegi sham'aa ki soorat ho Khudaya meri
Ho mere dam se yoonhi meray watan ki zeenat
Jis tarha phool se hoti hai chaman ki zeenat

Tey (do nuqto'n waala)

[dhump]

tamasha ke ae maho-e-aina dari
tujhay kis tamana sai hum dekhtay hain

YaY

[Looney]

Yeh na thi humari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota
Agar aur jeete rehte , yehi intezaar hota
Tere waade par jiye hum , to yeh jaan jhoot jana'n
Ke khushi se mar na jaate agar intezar hota
Yeh kahaa'n ki dosti hai ke bane hai'n dost naseh
Koi chaarasaz hota koi ghumguzar hota

Alif

[d0gers]

Yeh na thi humari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota
Agar aur jeete rehte , yehi intezaar hota
Tere waade par jiye hum , to yeh jaan jhoot jana'n
Ke khushi se mar na jaate agar intezar hota
Yeh kahaa'n ki dosti hai ke bane hai'n dost naseh
Koi chaarasaz hota koi ghumguzar hota

AlifLooney just one shair is needed (which in this case has been used before in this thread). No need to write out the whole ghazal :D

[d0gers]

Ibtida-e-ishq hay rota hay kya
Aagay aagay dekhiay hota hay kya

Alif

[Looney]

Looney just one shair is needed (which in this case has been used before in this thread). No need to write out the whole ghazal :D
i know but i got carried away because it is one of my favorites :afridi

[Momo]

i know but i got carried away because it is one of my favorites :afridi
If you get carried away, you will be carried away. :afridi

[Momo]

Ibtida-e-ishq hay rota hay kya
Aagay aagay dekhiay hota hay kya

Alif
Apni kasheed-e-jaan se hi peeta raha, jeeta raha
Nasha kahaan saaghar mein thha, masti kahaan botal mein thhi

Yay

[dhump]

Yeh mohobato ka lashkar jo karega fath-e-khyber
zara teri nafrato kai hisar tak to pohnchay

YaY

[Momo]

Ye mohabbat bhi hai kya rog Faraaz
Jis ko bhoole wo sada yaad aaya

Alif

[dhump]

Abhi khareed lain dunia kaha ki mehngi hai
magar zameer ka soda bura sa lagta hai

YaY

[Momo]

Yaad aaya thha bichharna tera
Phhir naheen yaad ke kya yaad aaya

Alif

[d0gers]

Aag ko khel patangon nay samajh rakha hay
Sab ko anjaam ka dar ho ye zaroori tou nahin

Noon

[ace4rmspace]

Nashey mein choor hoon mein bhi, tumhein bhi haush nahi
Baraa maza ho agar thori door saath chalo

Vau

[Looney]

Woh firaaq aur woh wisaal kahaa'n
Woh shab-o-roz-o-mah-o-saal kahaa'n


NooN

[d0gers]

Woh firaaq aur woh wisaal kahaa'n
Woh shab-o-roz-o-mah-o-saal kahaa'n


NooNPlease try again. See post #8.

[dhump]

Nasiha tujh ko khabar kia k muhabbat kia hai
roz ajata hai , samjhata hai , youn hai youn hai

YaY

[Momo]

Ye be dili hai to kashti ke paar kya utrain
Udhar bhi kaun hai? darya ke paar kya utrain?

Noon

[insaaniyat]

Ye be dili hai to kashti ke paar kya utrain
Udhar bhi haun hai? darya ke paar kya utrain?

Noon

naa-haq hum majbooron par yeh tohmat hai mukhtari kee
chaahte hain so aap karain, muft humain badnaam kiyaa

alif?

[Disco_Lemonade]

Ab faramosh karoge to nashaad karoge
Pr hum jo na honge to bohat yaad karoge

Yay.

[Momo]

Yun dil se kisi dard ka paimaan naheen karte
Ab jaan pe bani bhi hai to darmaan naheen karte

Yay

[Disco_Lemonade]

Yaad rakhna hee mohabbat mein nahi sab kuch,
Bhool jana bhee bari baat hua karti hai.

Yay

time to move from alif and yay !

[Momo]

time to move from alif and yay !

Ye bhi bara karam hai salaamat hai jism abhi
Ae khusrawaan-e-shehr qabaayein mujhe na do

Wow

(aur hukam karein janaab :) )

[ZAK]

Wo jo pi kar sharab niklay ga
Kis tarha aftab niklay ga

Alif (sorry muhtaram disco lemonade sahib :P)

[Momo]

Is qadar musalsal thheen shiddatein judayee ki
Aaj pehli baar us se maine be wafayee ki

Yay

[dhump]

kuch mazah lanay chaye khel main meri danist mai aisay shair post karnay chaye jinkay akhir mai "YaY" aur "Alif" na aye ??? kya khayal hai dosto ka ??? :inti

Arz Kiya hai kai

Yun saja chand kai jhalka tere andaz ka rung
Yun faza mahki kai badla mere humraz ka rung.

Gaaf

[Momo]

Gardanein tooti hueen, sar hain khameeda jin ke
Un ko sargashta-e-pindaar-e-imaamat dekhoon

Noon

[Cric_Dost]

Nahin tera nasheman qasr-e-sultani ke gumbad per
tu shaheen hai basera ker paharoon ki chatano per

Re

[Momo]

Nahin tera nasheman qasr-e-sultani ke gumbad per
tu shaheen hai basera ker paharoon ki chatano per

Re
I am sure this appeared earlier too, with the same mistake.
:misbah

[d0gers]

Gardanein tooti hueen, sar hain khameeda jin ke
Un ko sargashta-e-pindaar-e-imaamat dekhoon

NoonNa tu zameen ke liay hay na aasmaan ke liay
Jahan hay teray liay tu nahin jahan kay liay

Yay (sorry!)

[dhump]

Dair ho jane aur ghayab ho jane par mazrat

arz hai kai

yeh dil kai dagh to dikhtay thay yun bhi par kam kam
kuch ab kay aur hay hijran-e-yar ka mousam

MeeM

[d0gers]

Mera tareeq ameeri nahin faqeeri hay
Khudi na bech ghareebi mein naam paida kar

Ray

[insaaniyat]

Mera tareeq ameeri nahin faqeeri hay
Khudi na bech ghareebi mein naam paida kar

Ray

raha gardishon mein har dum mere ishq kaa sitara
kabhi dagmagaa-ee kashti, kabhi kho gaya kinaraa

alif

[Cric_Dost]

اس نے جلتی ہو ئی پیشا نی پہ جب ہاتھہ رکھا
روح تک پھیل گئ تا ثیر مسیحا ئی کی

ی

[Momo]

اس نے جلتی ہو ئی پیشا نی پہ جب ہاتھہ رکھا
روح تک پھیل گئ تا ثیر مسیحا ئی کی

ی
Rooh tak aa gayee taseer maseehaaii ki

Ye thheek hai naheen marta koi judaai mein
Khuda kisi ko kisi se magar juda na kare

Yay

[Cric_Dost]

Thanx for the correction ,MOMO .

yeh kiya ke sab se bayan dil ki halatain kerni
Faraz tujh ko na ayeen Muhabatain kerni

Noon

[Disco_Lemonade]

Na gul-e-naghma hoon na parda(h) saaz,
Mein hoon apni shikasst ki awaaz.

Zey

[Disco_Lemonade]

(aur hukam karein janaab :) )
Kuch biskoot, chaye, or cake russSss hojate to kya baat thi :inti

[Momo]

Kuch biskoot, chaye, or cake russSss hojate to kya baat thi :inti
Pardes mein kya yaad karwaa diya, zaalim!

[Momo]

Zamaana ke zanjeer-e-ayyaam hai
Damon ke ulat pher ka naam hai

Yay

[Disco_Lemonade]

Ya Rab! wo(h) na samjhey hain na samjhe(n)gey meri baat
Dey or dil unko jo na dein mujh ko zubaa(n) aur.

Rey

[dhump]

Wah yaha to mamla abhi tak rawa-n-dawan hai

Arz Kia hai

Rat ka garam lahuu aur bhi beh janay do
yeh hi tareki to hai ghaza-e-rukhasr-o-sehar


subha honay ko hai e dil-e-betab tehar

Ray

Ray

[ace4rmspace]

Raggoon mein daurney phirney ke hum nahi qail
Jo aankh hi se na tapkey to lahoo kiya hai

Yay

[Abdullah22]

Yeh Ghazi Yeh Teray Pur Asrar Banday
Jinhain Tunay Bakhsha hai Zauq-e-Khudai

Do Neem Un ki Thokar say Sahra o Darya
Simat kar Pahaar In ki Haybat say Rayi

Yay

[Looney]

Yeh tabiyat hai to khud aazaar ban jaaye'n ge hum
chaaraagar royen ge aur ghum khwar ban jaaye'n ge hum
ham sar-e-chaak-e-wafaa hain aur tera dast-e-hunar
jo banaa dega hamai'n , ae yaar ban jaaye'n ge ham

Meem