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dukki_badshah
12th April 2010, 16:51
hi guysss...

i am new on this forum n getting myself use to it..i am a big fan of urdu bait bazi so i thought why not start my first thread of bait bazii n know u guys more...so i will start first


ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se
Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta hai

whos next

ShehryarK
12th April 2010, 16:58
Welcome to PP :)

Have moved this thread to the Languages Forum - hopefully our resident shu'ara (aka nakaam ushaaq) can join you :)

ShehryarK
12th April 2010, 17:00
so i will start first


ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se
Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta hai

Hai...assuming its Urdu, means we need something starting with 'yay'....

"yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota...
kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."

Female Cricketer
12th April 2010, 18:01
Hai...assuming its Urdu, means we need something starting with 'yay'....

"yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota...
kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."
it means i have to ssay something with A right?...
Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile...
Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..

Momo
12th April 2010, 18:49
"yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota...
kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."
Ye na thhi hamaari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota
Agar aur jeete rehte yehi intazaar hota


Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile...
Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..
Ab ke hum bichhre to shayad kabhi khwaabon mein milen
Jis tarah sookhe huwe phhool kitaabon mein milen

:)

Momo
12th April 2010, 19:00
Noon

Na thha kuchh to khuda thha, kuchh na hota to khuda hota
Duboya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota

Alif

ZAK
12th April 2010, 20:46
Alif Allah chambe di booti murshid man wich lai hoo
nafi asbaat da paani milya har jaga har jai hoo

Wow

Momo
12th April 2010, 20:53
Wo firaaq aur wo wisaal kahaan
Wo shab-o-roz-o-maah-o-saal kahaan

Noon

ZAK
12th April 2010, 21:10
Nahi aati jo yaad unki to barso tak nahi aati
magar jab yaad aatain hain to aksar yaad aatay hain

Noon

dukki_badshah
12th April 2010, 23:15
na tha kuchch to KHuda tha, kuchch na hota to KHuda hota
duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota

Aliff

dukki_badshah
12th April 2010, 23:28
sorry didnt notice the that was already posted so here i go again

Na shikasta qalb hote na firaaq-e-yaar hota
Gar haami-e-mohabbat parwardigaar hota

its alif again

d0gers
12th April 2010, 23:57
ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se
Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta haiIs this even a shair? Sounds more like the intro to Neelam Ghar:

"Ibtida hay rab-e-jalil ke ba-barkat naam say, jo dilon ke bhaid khoob janta hai. Dekhti aankhon, suntay kaanon, aap ko Shabana, Farzana aur Tariq Aziz ka salaam pohanchay."

d0gers
12th April 2010, 23:59
sorry didnt notice the that was already posted so here i go again

Na shikasta qalb hote na firaaq-e-yaar hota
Gar haami-e-mohabbat parwardigaar hota

its alif againAshk aankhon mein kab nahin aata
Lahu aata hay jab nahin aata

Alif

ZAK
13th April 2010, 00:08
Aa gaye tum to jafaoon ka qalaq yaad nahi
dil voh baccha hai jise pehla sabaq yaad nahi

Yay

d0gers
13th April 2010, 00:50
'Nahin' ends in Noon, not Yay...

Nishan-e-rah dikhatay thay jo sitaaron ko
Taras gaye hein kisi mard-e-rahdaan kay liay

Yay

Momo
13th April 2010, 08:29
Ye masaail-e-tasawwuf, ye tera bayaan Ghaalib
Tujhe hum wali samajhte jo na baada khaar hota

Alif

Momo
13th April 2010, 08:31
Forgive me for getting off track but

"Ibtida hay rab-e-jalil ke ba-barkat naam say, jo dilon ke bhaid khoob janta hai. Dekhti aankhon, suntay kaanon, aap ko Shabana, Farzana aur Tariq Aziz ka salaam pohanchay."
:)))

Khabri420
13th April 2010, 08:33
Pardon my ignorance...but are we playing a version of Antakshari? :inzi

Momo
13th April 2010, 10:51
Aakhir hamaari khelne koodne ki umar hai. :afridi

dukki_badshah
13th April 2010, 15:26
i think its kind of Antakshari..

app ko deakh ker deakhta reh gayah,
kia kahoon our kehnay ko kai rah gaya

Alif

Momo
13th April 2010, 15:59
Un ki aankhon se kaese chhalakne laga
Mere honton pe jo maajara reh gaya

:D

Alif

ZAK
13th April 2010, 19:41
Ab keh tajdeed-e-wafa ka nahin imkan janan
yad kya tujh ko dilain tera paiman janan

Alif

d0gers
13th April 2010, 22:25
^ZAK Mian aap ko Noon say kya dushmani hay? :D

Nigah-e-faqr mein shaan-e-sikandari kya hay
Khiraaj ki jo gada ho woh qaisari kya hay

Yay

ZAK
13th April 2010, 22:31
^ZAK Mian aap ko Noon say kya dushmani hay? :D

Nigah-e-faqr mein shaan-e-sikandari kya hay
Khiraaj ki jo gada ho qoh qaisari kya hay

Yay

Mujhay noon say koi dushmani nahin dogar sahib asal dushmani mairu to is noon ghuna kay sath hai lakin Inshallah aainda is qism ki bay ihtyati waqu pazeer nahi ho gi :P

ZAK
13th April 2010, 22:47
Yay kon ghazal khuwan hai pur sozo nishat angaiz
andaisha-e-dana ko karta hai junoo aamaiz

Momo
16th April 2010, 22:17
Zindagi apni jab is shakl se guzri Ghaalib
Hum bhi kya yaad karein ge ke khuda rakhte thhe!

Yay

ZAK
17th April 2010, 00:23
Yay dil yay pagal dil mera kyon bujh gaya aawargi
is dasht mein ik shahar tha vo kya hua aawargi

Yay

d0gers
17th April 2010, 01:01
Ye baatein jhooti baatein hein, jo logon ne phelai hein
Tum Insha ji ka naam na lo, kya Insha ji saudai hein

Noon

Zechariah
17th April 2010, 01:44
Na shikwa hai koi na koi gila hai
Salaamat rahe tu yeh meri dua hai

Yay

Fawad_Bhai
17th April 2010, 04:07
oooh...so this is like Antakhshari..if yes then here i will try to continue
i am too young for this game though..too boring for me :P

Anyway,

Yeh hasta huwa chaand, yeh pur noor sitaarey
Tabinda o Painda hain zar-ron k sahaaray

d0gers
17th April 2010, 04:19
Ok please... this is not like Antakshari.... Antakshari is like bait baazi.

Kal ke bachay.... :P

Fawad_Bhai
17th April 2010, 06:29
Ok please... this is not like Antakshari.... Antakshari is like bait baazi.

Kal ke bachay.... :P


u mean Kal ke jawaan :akhtar

Aaj ke bachey :aamir

and one question...how do you pronounce this? is it (Bay-Uth-Baazi) or (baith Baazi)

and the shair i used, was it used correctly? :ibutt

Momo
17th April 2010, 10:43
Yaad thheen hum ko bhi ranga rang bazm aaraaiyaan
Lekin ab naqsh-o-nigaar-e-taaq-e-nisyaan ho gayeen

Noon

d0gers
17th April 2010, 10:54
Na ho nomeed, nomeedi zawal-e-ilm-o-irfan hay
Umeed-e-mard-e-momin hay Khuda ke raazdaanon mein

Noon

Momo
17th April 2010, 13:36
Naveed-e-amn hai bedaad-e-dost jaan ke liye
Rahi na tarz-e-sitam koi aasmaan ke liye

Yay

ZAK
17th April 2010, 20:35
Ya Rab dill-e-Muslim ko wo zinda tamana day
jo qalb ko garma day jo rooh ko tarpa day

Yay

d0gers
17th April 2010, 21:39
Ye jo deewane se do char nazar aatay hein
In mein kuch sahib-e-israr nazar aatey hein

Noon

Momo
17th April 2010, 21:49
Naheen ke mujh ko qayaamat ka aetaqaad naheen
Shab-e-firaaq se roz-e-jaza zeyaad naheen

Noon

ZAK
17th April 2010, 21:51
Nahin tera nasheman Qasr-e-Sultani ke gumbad par
tu shaheen hai basera kar paharoun ke chatanoun par

d0gers
17th April 2010, 21:57
^ That ends as "Tu shaheen hai basera kar paharoun ki chatanoun mein

So Noon again :D

Nigah buland sukhan dil nawaz jaan pursoz
Yehi hay rakht-e-safar mir-e-karavaan kay liay

Yay

Momo
17th April 2010, 22:01
Ye kahaan ki dosti hai ke bane hain dost naaseh
Koi chaara saaz hota, koi gham gusaar hota

Alif

d0gers
18th April 2010, 20:34
Aata hay yaad mujh ko guzra hua zamana
Woh bagh ki baharain woh sab ka chehchahana

Alif

ZAK
18th April 2010, 21:42
Iqbal bara updeshak hai, mann baton main mo leta hai
Guftar ka ye ghazi tou bana, kirdar ka ghazi ban na saka

Alif

Momo
18th April 2010, 23:10
Aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
Kaun jeeta hai teri zulf ke sar hone tak

Kaaf (kutte waala :)) )

d0gers
18th April 2010, 23:25
Khilen gi kaliyan banein ge ghunchay sajay gi phoolon ki sej lekin
Kia tha aanay ka jis ne waada wohi na aaya tou kya karo ge

Yay

ZAK
19th April 2010, 00:09
Yay khoon ki mehak hai kai lab-e-yaar ki khusboo
kis rah ki janib say saba aati hai daikho

Wow

Momo
19th April 2010, 00:17
Wafa kaesi, kahaan ka ishq, jab sar phorna thehra
To phir, ae sangdil, tera hi sang-e-aastaan kioon ho

Wow

ZAK
19th April 2010, 00:23
Wo jo hum main tum main qarar tha, tumhain yaad ho kay na yaad ho
wohi yaani wada nibah ka, tumhay yaad ho kay na yaad ho

Wow

Momo
19th April 2010, 00:27
Waaye gar mera tera insaaf mehshar mein na ho
Ab talak to ye tawaqqo hai ke waan ho jaaye ga

Alif

ZAK
19th April 2010, 00:31
Ibnay Maryam huwa karay koi
Mairay dukh ki dwa karay koi

Yay

Momo
19th April 2010, 00:54
Yun hi gar rota raha Ghaalib to ae ahle-e-jahaan
Dekhna in bastion ko tum ke weetaan ho gayeen

Noon

ZAK
19th April 2010, 01:03
Nuqta cheen hai gham-e-dil uss ko sunai na banay
kya banay baat, jahan baat banai na banay

Yay

d0gers
19th April 2010, 01:23
Ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaye
Woh but hay ya khuda dekha na jaye

Yay

ZAK
19th April 2010, 01:28
Ye jo sargushta say phirtay hain kitabon walay
In say mat mil kay inhay rog hain khwabon walay

Yay

Momo
19th April 2010, 08:50
Ye laash-e be-kafan Asad-e khasta jaan ki hai
Haq maghfirat kare ajab aazaad mard thha

Alif

d0gers
19th April 2010, 09:46
Uth kar tou aa gaye hein teri bazm se magar
Kuch dil hi jaanta hai ke kis dil se aaye hein

Noon

Momo
19th April 2010, 09:52
Na gul-e-naghma hoon, na parda-e-saaz
Main hoon apni shikast ki aawaaz

Zay

insaaniyat
19th April 2010, 11:31
it means i have to ssay something with A right?...
Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile...
Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..

aajkal kitaab parhta kaun hai:)

insaaniyat
19th April 2010, 11:33
Na gul-e-naghma hoon, na parda-e-saaz
Main hoon apni shikast ki aawaaz

Zay

Zahid sharaab peenay de masjid main baith kar
ya woj jagha bata, jahan par khuda na ho

hay

d0gers
19th April 2010, 12:26
Zahid sharaab peenay de masjid main baith kar
ya woj jagha bata, jahan par khuda na ho

hayNahin yaar.. Wow.. not hay. Last letter of the last word, not first letter of the last word.

Woh naye gilay woh shikayatein woh mazay mazay ki hikayatein
Woh har ek baat pe roothna tumhein yaad ho ke na yaad ho

Wow

Momo
19th April 2010, 12:35
Waa hasrata ke yaar ne khencha sitam se haath
Hum ko harees-e-lazzat-e-aazaar dekh kar

Ray

d0gers
19th April 2010, 12:47
Rahay ga Ravi-o-Neel-o-Faraat mein kab tak
Tera safina ke hay behr-e-bekaraan ke liay

Yay

Momo
19th April 2010, 13:12
Ya rab wo na samjhe hain, na samjhein ge meri baat
De aur dil un ko, jo na de mujh ko zubaan aur

Ray

ace4rmspace
19th April 2010, 16:33
Rahey marz-e-gham mein too mubtila, na davaa milley na shifa milley
Jo qazaa ki ho tujhey aarzoo teri umrr aur daraaz ho

Vao

dhump
19th April 2010, 17:07
vahin hain dil kai qrain tama kehtay hain
woh ik khalish kay jisay tera nam kehtay hain

YaY

Momo
19th April 2010, 18:26
Ye rashk hai ke wo hota hai hamsukhan tum se
Waqarna khauf-e-bad aamozi-e-adu kya hai

Yay

ace4rmspace
19th April 2010, 18:39
Yeh jo deewaaney se do chaar nazar aatey hain
In mein kuch Sahib-e-Israar nazar aatey hain

Noon

dhump
19th April 2010, 18:46
nasiha dil main tu itna to samajh apne k hum
lakh nadan huye, kya tujh say bhi nadan honge

YaY

dhump
19th April 2010, 18:49
Momo apnai apni woh post to ghayab hi kardi jismai apka shair ray par Khatam ho raha tha :(

Momo
19th April 2010, 18:53
Momo apnai apni woh post to ghayab hi kardi jismai apka shair ray par Khatam ho raha tha :(
Because you beat me to it by a few milliseconds. Now I have to start from Yay.

We have a strictly one sher policy. :)

ace4rmspace
19th April 2010, 18:54
Yazdaan ne muskuraa ke bardee dair mein likha
Ik lafz "Arzoo" merey dil ke kitaab mein

Koi baat nahi dhump sahib, Noon lejiyey ...

Momo
19th April 2010, 18:56
Na lut-ta din ko to kab raat ko yun be-khabar sota
Raha na khatka chori ka duaa deta hoon rahzan ko

Wow

dhump
19th April 2010, 19:08
Ace sahab momo bazi le gaye is bar aur hum lunch kartay reh gaye.

woh rat be-panah thi aur mai ghareeb tha
woh jisnai yeh charagh jalaya ajeeb tha

Alif

ace4rmspace
19th April 2010, 19:15
Ae zindagi ik baar too nazdeeq aa tanha hoon mein
Ya door se phir de mujhey koi sadaa tanha hoon mein

Noon

Waisey agar yaaroon ki tabah-e-naazuk pe giraan na guzrey to hakeer is band ko mukammil karney ki gustakhi kiyey ja raha hai, maazrat ka khaastgaar hoon ...

Duniya ki mehfil mein kahein mein hoon bhi shaid ya nahi
Ik umrr se is soch mein dooba huwa tanha hoon mein

dhump
19th April 2010, 19:23
Bohot khoob janab.

naye dais ka rung naya tha
dharti sai akash mila tha

sochta hon pehli barish bhi mukamal kardon :D par phir kabhi sahi.

Alif

ZAK
19th April 2010, 19:54
Un say nain mila kay daikho
Yay dokha bhi kha kay daikho

Wow

Momo
19th April 2010, 20:42
Wo aaye ghar mein hamaare, khuda ki qudrat hai
Kabhi hum un ko kabhi apne ghar ko dekhte hain

Noon

d0gers
19th April 2010, 21:36
Yeh jo deewaaney se do chaar nazar aatey hain
In mein kuch Sahib-e-Israar nazar aatey hain

NoonAhem... *cough* post #37 *cough*.

d0gers
19th April 2010, 21:40
Na woh ishq mein rahin garmiyan na woh husn mein rahin shokhian
Na woh Ghaznavi mein tarap rahi na woh kham hay zulf-e-Ayaz mein

Noon

Momo
19th April 2010, 23:07
Nafas na anjuman-e-aarzoo se baahar khhench
Agar sharaab naheen, intazaar-e-saaghar khhench

Chay

dhump
20th April 2010, 00:17
Nafas na anjuman-e-aarzoo se baahar khhench
Agar sharaab naheen, intazaar-e-saaghar khhench

Chay


Chand dekha teri ankhon mai na honto pe shafaq
milti julti hai shab-e-ghum sai teri deed abkay

YAY

d0gers
20th April 2010, 00:32
Ye meray saath kaisi roshni hay
Ke mujh se raasta dekha na jaye

Yay

insaaniyat
20th April 2010, 09:48
Ye meray saath kaisi roshni hay
Ke mujh se raasta dekha na jaye

Yay

yaad-e-maazi azaab hai ya-rab
cheen le mujh se haafzaa mera

alif?

d0gers
20th April 2010, 10:30
yaad-e-maazi azaab hai ya-rab
cheen le mujh se haafzaa mera

alif?


na thaa kuch tou khuda thaa, kuch na hota tou khud hota
duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, na hotaa main tou kiya hotaa

alif?Yes, Alif in both cases. But you only need to respond to the last 'outstanding' shair. Also the 2nd shair has already been used in this thread. Twice :D

Utha na sheesha giran-e-farang ke ehsaan
Sifal-e-Hind se meena-o-jaam paida kar

Ray

Momo
20th April 2010, 10:39
Rone se aur ishq mein bebaak ho gaye
Dhoye gaye hum aise ke bas paak ho gaye

Yay

Momo
20th April 2010, 10:42
you only need to respond to the last 'outstanding' shair.
All participants, please note the above. This is bait baazi, not kabootar baazi or any other kind of baazi. :yk

ace4rmspace
20th April 2010, 15:35
Ahem... *cough* post #37 *cough*.

Oh err ... but that was such a long time ago!

(Sorry, I didn't see it, my bad!)

ace4rmspace
20th April 2010, 16:09
Yeh kaun laug andheiroon ki baat kartey hain
Abhi to chaand teri yaad ke dhalley bhi nahi

Noon janaab

Momo
20th April 2010, 16:40
Naqsh faryaadi hai kis ki shokhi-e-tehreer ka
Kaaghazi hai pairahan har paikar-e-tasweer ka

Alif

dhump
20th April 2010, 18:48
ahl-e-dil kai darmian thay meer tum
ab sukhan hay shobdakaron kai bech

Chay

ace4rmspace
20th April 2010, 19:10
Chaoon mein baithney waaley hi to sab se pehley
Paird girta hai to aa jaatey hain aarey le kar

Ray

Momo
20th April 2010, 19:38
Raat din gardish mein hain saat aasmaan
Ho rahe ga kuchh na kuchh ghabraayen kya

Alif

ace4rmspace
20th April 2010, 19:49
Us ne jalti huwi paishaani pe jab haath rakha
Rooh tak a gai taaseer Maseehayee ki

Yay

Momo
20th April 2010, 19:58
Ye fitna aadmi ki khaana weerani ko kya kam hai
Hu-e tum dost jis ke, dushman us ka aasmaan kioon ho

Wow

ace4rmspace
20th April 2010, 20:18
Woh kaheen bhi gaya, lauta to merey paas aya
Bas yehi baat hai achi merey harjai ki

Yay

ZAK
20th April 2010, 20:20
.

ace4rmspace
20th April 2010, 20:24
.

Bohat acha "Nukta" uthaya hai Zak Sahib.

ZAK
20th April 2010, 20:29
Bohat acha "Nukta" uthaya hai Zak Sahib.

Aadab :P

ZAK
20th April 2010, 20:32
Yay tabiyat hai to khud aazar ban ja'ain gay hum
Chara gar royain gay or ghum khwar ban ja'ain gay hum

Meem

ace4rmspace
20th April 2010, 20:46
Merey shauk da nahi aitebaar teinoon, aja vaikh mera intezaar aja
Ainvein larrann bahaanrey labhna ein, keh toon sochna ein sitamgaar aja

Alif

insaaniyat
20th April 2010, 21:24
Yes, Alif in both cases. But you only need to respond to the last 'outstanding' shair. Also the 2nd shair has already been used in this thread. Twice :D

Utha na sheesha giran-e-farang ke ehsaan
Sifal-e-Hind se meena-o-jaam paida kar

Ray

thank you yaar.

Looney
20th April 2010, 22:37
Alif

Ulti hogayee'n sab tadbeeraii'n kuch dawa ne na kaam kiya
Dekhaa is bemaari-e-dil ne aakhir kaam tamaam kiya

Alif again :D

d0gers
20th April 2010, 23:03
Abhi tou tanqeed ho rahi hay meray mazaaq-e-junoon pe lekin
Tumhari zulfon ki barhami ka sawaal aaya tou kya karo ge

Yay

Looney
20th April 2010, 23:20
Yay

Yeh aur baat teri gali mei'n na aaye hum
Lekin yeh kia ke tera shehar chor jaaye'n hum

Meem

ZAK
20th April 2010, 23:34
Main us ka dost hoon wo aitraaf karta tha
Magar wo batain bhi mairay khilaaf karta tha

Alif

Looney
20th April 2010, 23:43
Insha ji utho ab kooch karo is shehar mai'n ji ko lagana kia
Wehshi ko sukoo'n se kia matlab jogi ka nagar mai'n thikana kia

Alif

d0gers
21st April 2010, 00:04
Is dil ke dareeda daaman mein dekho tou sahih socho tou sahih
Jis jholi mein sau chaid huay us jholi ka pehlana kia

I get 25 points for continuation :D

Alif

Looney
21st April 2010, 04:55
^haha it is one of my favorites :D

Ae khaak-e-nashino'n uth baitho woh waqt qareeb aan pohancha hai
Jab takht giraye jaaye'n ge jab taj uchaale jaaye'n ge
Ab toot girai'n gi zanjeerai'n ab zindano'n ki khair nahi
Jo darya jhoom ke uthay hai'n tinko'n se na taalay jaaye'n ge :Zardari

Yay

dhump
21st April 2010, 14:39
Yahan to jazbiyat bhi hai dolat he ki parwarda
Ye larki faqaqash hoti to badsoorat nazar ati

YaY

Looney
21st April 2010, 22:20
Yeh jo hum hijr mai'n diwaar-o-dar ko dekhte hai'n
Kabhi saba ko kabhi naamaabar ko dekhte hai'n
Woh aaye humare ghar mai'n Khuda ki qudrat hai
Kabhi hum un ko kabhi apne ghar ko dekhte hai'n

Noon

Momo
21st April 2010, 22:52
A slight correction:


Yeh hum jo hijr mai'n diwaar-o-dar ko dekhte hai'n
Kabhi saba ko kabhi naamaabar ko dekhte hai'n
Woh aaye ghar mai'n hamaare, Khuda ki qudrat hai
Kabhi hum un ko kabhi apne ghar ko dekhte hai'n

Na tum aaye na shab-e-intazaar guzri hai
Talaash mein hai sehar, baar baar guzri hai

Yay

insaaniyat
22nd April 2010, 12:10
A slight correction:



Na tum aaye na shab-e-intazaar guzri hai
Talaash mein hai sehar, baar baar guzri hai

Yay

Yaad rakho tou dil ke paas hun main
bhool jaa-o tou faasle hain bahot

tey
ت

d0gers
22nd April 2010, 17:49
Tu rahnawarde shauq hay manzil na kar qubool
Laila bhi humnasheen ho tou mehmil na kar qubool

Laam

Looney
22nd April 2010, 22:01
@Momo: thanks bro

Lab pe aati hai dua ban ke tamanna meri
Zindegi sham'aa ki soorat ho Khudaya meri
Ho mere dam se yoonhi meray watan ki zeenat
Jis tarha phool se hoti hai chaman ki zeenat

Tey (do nuqto'n waala)

dhump
23rd April 2010, 01:51
tamasha ke ae maho-e-aina dari
tujhay kis tamana sai hum dekhtay hain

YaY

Looney
23rd April 2010, 04:32
Yeh na thi humari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota
Agar aur jeete rehte , yehi intezaar hota
Tere waade par jiye hum , to yeh jaan jhoot jana'n
Ke khushi se mar na jaate agar intezar hota
Yeh kahaa'n ki dosti hai ke bane hai'n dost naseh
Koi chaarasaz hota koi ghumguzar hota

Alif

d0gers
23rd April 2010, 05:52
Yeh na thi humari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota
Agar aur jeete rehte , yehi intezaar hota
Tere waade par jiye hum , to yeh jaan jhoot jana'n
Ke khushi se mar na jaate agar intezar hota
Yeh kahaa'n ki dosti hai ke bane hai'n dost naseh
Koi chaarasaz hota koi ghumguzar hota

AlifLooney just one shair is needed (which in this case has been used before in this thread). No need to write out the whole ghazal :D

d0gers
23rd April 2010, 06:02
Ibtida-e-ishq hay rota hay kya
Aagay aagay dekhiay hota hay kya

Alif

Looney
23rd April 2010, 06:20
Looney just one shair is needed (which in this case has been used before in this thread). No need to write out the whole ghazal :D
i know but i got carried away because it is one of my favorites :afridi

Momo
23rd April 2010, 11:31
i know but i got carried away because it is one of my favorites :afridi
If you get carried away, you will be carried away. :afridi

Momo
23rd April 2010, 11:32
Ibtida-e-ishq hay rota hay kya
Aagay aagay dekhiay hota hay kya

Alif
Apni kasheed-e-jaan se hi peeta raha, jeeta raha
Nasha kahaan saaghar mein thha, masti kahaan botal mein thhi

Yay

dhump
23rd April 2010, 15:42
Yeh mohobato ka lashkar jo karega fath-e-khyber
zara teri nafrato kai hisar tak to pohnchay

YaY

Momo
23rd April 2010, 17:20
Ye mohabbat bhi hai kya rog Faraaz
Jis ko bhoole wo sada yaad aaya

Alif

dhump
23rd April 2010, 17:51
Abhi khareed lain dunia kaha ki mehngi hai
magar zameer ka soda bura sa lagta hai

YaY

Momo
23rd April 2010, 18:28
Yaad aaya thha bichharna tera
Phhir naheen yaad ke kya yaad aaya

Alif

d0gers
23rd April 2010, 21:34
Aag ko khel patangon nay samajh rakha hay
Sab ko anjaam ka dar ho ye zaroori tou nahin

Noon

ace4rmspace
23rd April 2010, 21:59
Nashey mein choor hoon mein bhi, tumhein bhi haush nahi
Baraa maza ho agar thori door saath chalo

Vau

Looney
23rd April 2010, 22:11
Woh firaaq aur woh wisaal kahaa'n
Woh shab-o-roz-o-mah-o-saal kahaa'n


NooN

d0gers
24th April 2010, 00:53
Woh firaaq aur woh wisaal kahaa'n
Woh shab-o-roz-o-mah-o-saal kahaa'n


NooNPlease try again. See post #8.

dhump
24th April 2010, 03:59
Nasiha tujh ko khabar kia k muhabbat kia hai
roz ajata hai , samjhata hai , youn hai youn hai

YaY

Momo
24th April 2010, 11:22
Ye be dili hai to kashti ke paar kya utrain
Udhar bhi kaun hai? darya ke paar kya utrain?

Noon

insaaniyat
24th April 2010, 11:54
Ye be dili hai to kashti ke paar kya utrain
Udhar bhi haun hai? darya ke paar kya utrain?

Noon

naa-haq hum majbooron par yeh tohmat hai mukhtari kee
chaahte hain so aap karain, muft humain badnaam kiyaa

alif?

Disco_Lemonade
24th April 2010, 14:54
Ab faramosh karoge to nashaad karoge
Pr hum jo na honge to bohat yaad karoge

Yay.

Momo
24th April 2010, 15:33
Yun dil se kisi dard ka paimaan naheen karte
Ab jaan pe bani bhi hai to darmaan naheen karte

Yay

Disco_Lemonade
24th April 2010, 16:05
Yaad rakhna hee mohabbat mein nahi sab kuch,
Bhool jana bhee bari baat hua karti hai.

Yay

time to move from alif and yay !

Momo
24th April 2010, 16:26
time to move from alif and yay !

Ye bhi bara karam hai salaamat hai jism abhi
Ae khusrawaan-e-shehr qabaayein mujhe na do

Wow

(aur hukam karein janaab :) )

ZAK
24th April 2010, 21:38
Wo jo pi kar sharab niklay ga
Kis tarha aftab niklay ga

Alif (sorry muhtaram disco lemonade sahib :P)

Momo
24th April 2010, 22:19
Is qadar musalsal thheen shiddatein judayee ki
Aaj pehli baar us se maine be wafayee ki

Yay

dhump
25th April 2010, 03:13
kuch mazah lanay chaye khel main meri danist mai aisay shair post karnay chaye jinkay akhir mai "YaY" aur "Alif" na aye ??? kya khayal hai dosto ka ??? :inti

Arz Kiya hai kai

Yun saja chand kai jhalka tere andaz ka rung
Yun faza mahki kai badla mere humraz ka rung.

Gaaf

Momo
25th April 2010, 16:27
Gardanein tooti hueen, sar hain khameeda jin ke
Un ko sargashta-e-pindaar-e-imaamat dekhoon

Noon

Cric_Dost
25th April 2010, 17:45
Nahin tera nasheman qasr-e-sultani ke gumbad per
tu shaheen hai basera ker paharoon ki chatano per

Re

Momo
25th April 2010, 20:46
Nahin tera nasheman qasr-e-sultani ke gumbad per
tu shaheen hai basera ker paharoon ki chatano per

Re
I am sure this appeared earlier too, with the same mistake.
:misbah

d0gers
25th April 2010, 21:37
Gardanein tooti hueen, sar hain khameeda jin ke
Un ko sargashta-e-pindaar-e-imaamat dekhoon

NoonNa tu zameen ke liay hay na aasmaan ke liay
Jahan hay teray liay tu nahin jahan kay liay

Yay (sorry!)

dhump
27th April 2010, 01:12
Dair ho jane aur ghayab ho jane par mazrat

arz hai kai

yeh dil kai dagh to dikhtay thay yun bhi par kam kam
kuch ab kay aur hay hijran-e-yar ka mousam

MeeM

d0gers
27th April 2010, 04:51
Mera tareeq ameeri nahin faqeeri hay
Khudi na bech ghareebi mein naam paida kar

Ray

insaaniyat
27th April 2010, 09:11
Mera tareeq ameeri nahin faqeeri hay
Khudi na bech ghareebi mein naam paida kar

Ray

raha gardishon mein har dum mere ishq kaa sitara
kabhi dagmagaa-ee kashti, kabhi kho gaya kinaraa

alif

Cric_Dost
28th April 2010, 22:04
اس نے جلتی ہو ئی پیشا نی پہ جب ہاتھہ رکھا
روح تک پھیل گئ تا ثیر مسیحا ئی کی

ی

Momo
29th April 2010, 09:42
اس نے جلتی ہو ئی پیشا نی پہ جب ہاتھہ رکھا
روح تک پھیل گئ تا ثیر مسیحا ئی کی

ی
Rooh tak aa gayee taseer maseehaaii ki

Ye thheek hai naheen marta koi judaai mein
Khuda kisi ko kisi se magar juda na kare

Yay

Cric_Dost
29th April 2010, 23:25
Thanx for the correction ,MOMO .

yeh kiya ke sab se bayan dil ki halatain kerni
Faraz tujh ko na ayeen Muhabatain kerni

Noon

Disco_Lemonade
30th April 2010, 00:03
Na gul-e-naghma hoon na parda(h) saaz,
Mein hoon apni shikasst ki awaaz.

Zey

Disco_Lemonade
30th April 2010, 00:06
(aur hukam karein janaab :) )
Kuch biskoot, chaye, or cake russSss hojate to kya baat thi :inti

Momo
30th April 2010, 20:39
Kuch biskoot, chaye, or cake russSss hojate to kya baat thi :inti
Pardes mein kya yaad karwaa diya, zaalim!

Momo
30th April 2010, 20:44
Zamaana ke zanjeer-e-ayyaam hai
Damon ke ulat pher ka naam hai

Yay

Disco_Lemonade
3rd May 2010, 03:40
Ya Rab! wo(h) na samjhey hain na samjhe(n)gey meri baat
Dey or dil unko jo na dein mujh ko zubaa(n) aur.

Rey

dhump
11th May 2010, 18:18
Wah yaha to mamla abhi tak rawa-n-dawan hai

Arz Kia hai

Rat ka garam lahuu aur bhi beh janay do
yeh hi tareki to hai ghaza-e-rukhasr-o-sehar


subha honay ko hai e dil-e-betab tehar

Ray

Ray

ace4rmspace
23rd June 2010, 22:51
Raggoon mein daurney phirney ke hum nahi qail
Jo aankh hi se na tapkey to lahoo kiya hai

Yay

Abdullah22
24th June 2010, 17:57
Yeh Ghazi Yeh Teray Pur Asrar Banday
Jinhain Tunay Bakhsha hai Zauq-e-Khudai

Do Neem Un ki Thokar say Sahra o Darya
Simat kar Pahaar In ki Haybat say Rayi

Yay

Looney
3rd October 2010, 04:35
Yeh tabiyat hai to khud aazaar ban jaaye'n ge hum
chaaraagar royen ge aur ghum khwar ban jaaye'n ge hum
ham sar-e-chaak-e-wafaa hain aur tera dast-e-hunar
jo banaa dega hamai'n , ae yaar ban jaaye'n ge ham

Meem