Bait Baazi

[dukki_badshah]

hi guysss...

i am new on this forum n getting myself use to it..i am a big fan of urdu bait bazi so i thought why not start my first thread of bait bazii n know u guys more...so i will start first


ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se
Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta hai

whos next

[ShehryarK]

Welcome to PP

Have moved this thread to the Languages Forum - hopefully our resident shu'ara (aka nakaam ushaaq) can join you

[ShehryarK]

Originally Posted by dukki_badshah so i will start first ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta hai

Hai...assuming its Urdu, means we need something starting with 'yay'....

"yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota...
kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."

[Female Cricketer]

Originally Posted by ShehryarK Hai...assuming its Urdu, means we need something starting with 'yay'.... "yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota... kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."

it means i have to ssay something with A right?...
Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile...
Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..

[Momo]

Originally Posted by ShehryarK "yeh na thi hamari qismat, keh wisaal-e-yaar hota... kya bura tha hamain marna, gar aik baar hota..."

Ye na thhi hamaari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota
Agar aur jeete rehte yehi intazaar hota

Originally Posted by Female Cricketer Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile... Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..

Ab ke hum bichhre to shayad kabhi khwaabon mein milen
Jis tarah sookhe huwe phhool kitaabon mein milen

[Momo]

Noon

Na thha kuchh to khuda thha, kuchh na hota to khuda hota
Duboya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota

Alif

[ZAK]

Alif Allah chambe di booti murshid man wich lai hoo
nafi asbaat da paani milya har jaga har jai hoo

Wow

[Momo]

Wo firaaq aur wo wisaal kahaan
Wo shab-o-roz-o-maah-o-saal kahaan

Noon

[ZAK]

Nahi aati jo yaad unki to barso tak nahi aati
magar jab yaad aatain hain to aksar yaad aatay hain

Noon

[dukki_badshah]

na tha kuchch to KHuda tha, kuchch na hota to KHuda hota
duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota maiN to kya hota

Aliff

[dukki_badshah]

sorry didnt notice the that was already posted so here i go again

Na shikasta qalb hote na firaaq-e-yaar hota
Gar haami-e-mohabbat parwardigaar hota

its alif again

[d0gers]

Originally Posted by dukki_badshah ibtada hai RABE-JALIL k Naam se Jo diloo k bahaid khoob janta hai

Is this even a shair? Sounds more like the intro to Neelam Ghar:

"Ibtida hay rab-e-jalil ke ba-barkat naam say, jo dilon ke bhaid khoob janta hai. Dekhti aankhon, suntay kaanon, aap ko Shabana, Farzana aur Tariq Aziz ka salaam pohanchay."

[d0gers]

Originally Posted by dukki_badshah sorry didnt notice the that was already posted so here i go again Na shikasta qalb hote na firaaq-e-yaar hota Gar haami-e-mohabbat parwardigaar hota its alif again

Ashk aankhon mein kab nahin aata
Lahu aata hay jab nahin aata

Alif

[ZAK]

Aa gaye tum to jafaoon ka qalaq yaad nahi
dil voh baccha hai jise pehla sabaq yaad nahi

Yay

[d0gers]

'Nahin' ends in Noon, not Yay...

Nishan-e-rah dikhatay thay jo sitaaron ko
Taras gaye hein kisi mard-e-rahdaan kay liay

Yay

[Momo]

Ye masaail-e-tasawwuf, ye tera bayaan Ghaalib
Tujhe hum wali samajhte jo na baada khaar hota

Alif

[Momo]

Forgive me for getting off track but

Originally Posted by d0gers "Ibtida hay rab-e-jalil ke ba-barkat naam say, jo dilon ke bhaid khoob janta hai. Dekhti aankhon, suntay kaanon, aap ko Shabana, Farzana aur Tariq Aziz ka salaam pohanchay."

[Khabri420]

Pardon my ignorance...but are we playing a version of Antakshari?

[Momo]

Aakhir hamaari khelne koodne ki umar hai.

[dukki_badshah]

i think its kind of Antakshari..

app ko deakh ker deakhta reh gayah,
kia kahoon our kehnay ko kai rah gaya

Alif

[Momo]

Un ki aankhon se kaese chhalakne laga
Mere honton pe jo maajara reh gaya



Alif

[ZAK]

Ab keh tajdeed-e-wafa ka nahin imkan janan
yad kya tujh ko dilain tera paiman janan

Alif

[d0gers]

^ZAK Mian aap ko Noon say kya dushmani hay?

Nigah-e-faqr mein shaan-e-sikandari kya hay
Khiraaj ki jo gada ho woh qaisari kya hay

Yay

[ZAK]

Originally Posted by d0gers ^ZAK Mian aap ko Noon say kya dushmani hay? Nigah-e-faqr mein shaan-e-sikandari kya hay Khiraaj ki jo gada ho qoh qaisari kya hay Yay

Mujhay noon say koi dushmani nahin dogar sahib asal dushmani mairu to is noon ghuna kay sath hai lakin Inshallah aainda is qism ki bay ihtyati waqu pazeer nahi ho gi

[ZAK]

Yay kon ghazal khuwan hai pur sozo nishat angaiz
andaisha-e-dana ko karta hai junoo aamaiz

[Momo]

Zindagi apni jab is shakl se guzri Ghaalib
Hum bhi kya yaad karein ge ke khuda rakhte thhe!

Yay

[ZAK]

Yay dil yay pagal dil mera kyon bujh gaya aawargi
is dasht mein ik shahar tha vo kya hua aawargi

Yay

[d0gers]

Ye baatein jhooti baatein hein, jo logon ne phelai hein
Tum Insha ji ka naam na lo, kya Insha ji saudai hein

Noon

[Zechariah]

Na shikwa hai koi na koi gila hai
Salaamat rahe tu yeh meri dua hai

Yay

[Fawad_Bhai]

oooh...so this is like Antakhshari..if yes then here i will try to continue
i am too young for this game though..too boring for me

Anyway,

Yeh hasta huwa chaand, yeh pur noor sitaarey
Tabinda o Painda hain zar-ron k sahaaray

[d0gers]

Ok please... this is not like Antakshari.... Antakshari is like bait baazi.

Kal ke bachay....

[Fawad_Bhai]

Originally Posted by d0gers Ok please... this is not like Antakshari.... Antakshari is like bait baazi. Kal ke bachay....

u mean Kal ke jawaan

Aaj ke bachey :aamir

and one question...how do you pronounce this? is it (Bay-Uth-Baazi) or (baith Baazi)

and the shair i used, was it used correctly?

[Momo]

Yaad thheen hum ko bhi ranga rang bazm aaraaiyaan
Lekin ab naqsh-o-nigaar-e-taaq-e-nisyaan ho gayeen

Noon

[d0gers]

Na ho nomeed, nomeedi zawal-e-ilm-o-irfan hay
Umeed-e-mard-e-momin hay Khuda ke raazdaanon mein

Noon

[Momo]

Naveed-e-amn hai bedaad-e-dost jaan ke liye
Rahi na tarz-e-sitam koi aasmaan ke liye

Yay

[ZAK]

Ya Rab dill-e-Muslim ko wo zinda tamana day
jo qalb ko garma day jo rooh ko tarpa day

Yay

[d0gers]

Ye jo deewane se do char nazar aatay hein
In mein kuch sahib-e-israr nazar aatey hein

Noon

[Momo]

Naheen ke mujh ko qayaamat ka aetaqaad naheen
Shab-e-firaaq se roz-e-jaza zeyaad naheen

Noon

[ZAK]

Nahin tera nasheman Qasr-e-Sultani ke gumbad par
tu shaheen hai basera kar paharoun ke chatanoun par

[d0gers]

^ That ends as "Tu shaheen hai basera kar paharoun ki chatanoun mein

So Noon again

Nigah buland sukhan dil nawaz jaan pursoz
Yehi hay rakht-e-safar mir-e-karavaan kay liay

Yay

[Momo]

Ye kahaan ki dosti hai ke bane hain dost naaseh
Koi chaara saaz hota, koi gham gusaar hota

Alif

[d0gers]

Aata hay yaad mujh ko guzra hua zamana
Woh bagh ki baharain woh sab ka chehchahana

Alif

[ZAK]

Iqbal bara updeshak hai, mann baton main mo leta hai
Guftar ka ye ghazi tou bana, kirdar ka ghazi ban na saka

Alif

[Momo]

Aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
Kaun jeeta hai teri zulf ke sar hone tak

Kaaf (kutte waala )

[d0gers]

Khilen gi kaliyan banein ge ghunchay sajay gi phoolon ki sej lekin
Kia tha aanay ka jis ne waada wohi na aaya tou kya karo ge

Yay

[ZAK]

Yay khoon ki mehak hai kai lab-e-yaar ki khusboo
kis rah ki janib say saba aati hai daikho

Wow

[Momo]

Wafa kaesi, kahaan ka ishq, jab sar phorna thehra
To phir, ae sangdil, tera hi sang-e-aastaan kioon ho

Wow

[ZAK]

Wo jo hum main tum main qarar tha, tumhain yaad ho kay na yaad ho
wohi yaani wada nibah ka, tumhay yaad ho kay na yaad ho

Wow

[Momo]

Waaye gar mera tera insaaf mehshar mein na ho
Ab talak to ye tawaqqo hai ke waan ho jaaye ga

Alif

[ZAK]

Ibnay Maryam huwa karay koi
Mairay dukh ki dwa karay koi

Yay

[Momo]

Yun hi gar rota raha Ghaalib to ae ahle-e-jahaan
Dekhna in bastion ko tum ke weetaan ho gayeen

Noon

[ZAK]

Nuqta cheen hai gham-e-dil uss ko sunai na banay
kya banay baat, jahan baat banai na banay

Yay

[d0gers]

Ye aalam shauq ka dekha na jaye
Woh but hay ya khuda dekha na jaye

Yay

[ZAK]

Ye jo sargushta say phirtay hain kitabon walay
In say mat mil kay inhay rog hain khwabon walay

Yay

[Momo]

Ye laash-e be-kafan Asad-e khasta jaan ki hai
Haq maghfirat kare ajab aazaad mard thha

Alif

[d0gers]

Uth kar tou aa gaye hein teri bazm se magar
Kuch dil hi jaanta hai ke kis dil se aaye hein

Noon

[Momo]

Na gul-e-naghma hoon, na parda-e-saaz
Main hoon apni shikast ki aawaaz

Zay

[insaaniyat]

Originally Posted by Female Cricketer it means i have to ssay something with A right?... Ab k bicharay tu shayed khawabon mai mile... Jistarah sokhay hoye phool kitaboon mai mile..

aajkal kitaab parhta kaun hai

[insaaniyat]

Originally Posted by Momo Na gul-e-naghma hoon, na parda-e-saaz Main hoon apni shikast ki aawaaz Zay

Zahid sharaab peenay de masjid main baith kar
ya woj jagha bata, jahan par khuda na ho

hay

[d0gers]

Originally Posted by insaaniyat Zahid sharaab peenay de masjid main baith kar ya woj jagha bata, jahan par khuda na ho hay

Nahin yaar.. Wow.. not hay. Last letter of the last word, not first letter of the last word.

Woh naye gilay woh shikayatein woh mazay mazay ki hikayatein
Woh har ek baat pe roothna tumhein yaad ho ke na yaad ho

Wow

[Momo]

Waa hasrata ke yaar ne khencha sitam se haath
Hum ko harees-e-lazzat-e-aazaar dekh kar

Ray

[d0gers]

Rahay ga Ravi-o-Neel-o-Faraat mein kab tak
Tera safina ke hay behr-e-bekaraan ke liay

Yay

[Momo]

Ya rab wo na samjhe hain, na samjhein ge meri baat
De aur dil un ko, jo na de mujh ko zubaan aur

Ray

[ace4rmspace]

Rahey marz-e-gham mein too mubtila, na davaa milley na shifa milley
Jo qazaa ki ho tujhey aarzoo teri umrr aur daraaz ho

Vao

[dhump]

vahin hain dil kai qrain tama kehtay hain
woh ik khalish kay jisay tera nam kehtay hain

YaY

[Momo]

Ye rashk hai ke wo hota hai hamsukhan tum se
Waqarna khauf-e-bad aamozi-e-adu kya hai

Yay

[ace4rmspace]

Yeh jo deewaaney se do chaar nazar aatey hain
In mein kuch Sahib-e-Israar nazar aatey hain

Noon

[dhump]

nasiha dil main tu itna to samajh apne k hum
lakh nadan huye, kya tujh say bhi nadan honge

YaY

[dhump]

Momo apnai apni woh post to ghayab hi kardi jismai apka shair ray par Khatam ho raha tha

[Momo]

Originally Posted by dhump Momo apnai apni woh post to ghayab hi kardi jismai apka shair ray par Khatam ho raha tha

Because you beat me to it by a few milliseconds. Now I have to start from Yay.

We have a strictly one sher policy.

[ace4rmspace]

Yazdaan ne muskuraa ke bardee dair mein likha
Ik lafz "Arzoo" merey dil ke kitaab mein

Koi baat nahi dhump sahib, Noon lejiyey ...

[Momo]

Na lut-ta din ko to kab raat ko yun be-khabar sota
Raha na khatka chori ka duaa deta hoon rahzan ko

Wow

[dhump]

Ace sahab momo bazi le gaye is bar aur hum lunch kartay reh gaye.

woh rat be-panah thi aur mai ghareeb tha
woh jisnai yeh charagh jalaya ajeeb tha

Alif

[ace4rmspace]

Ae zindagi ik baar too nazdeeq aa tanha hoon mein
Ya door se phir de mujhey koi sadaa tanha hoon mein

Noon

Waisey agar yaaroon ki tabah-e-naazuk pe giraan na guzrey to hakeer is band ko mukammil karney ki gustakhi kiyey ja raha hai, maazrat ka khaastgaar hoon ...

Duniya ki mehfil mein kahein mein hoon bhi shaid ya nahi
Ik umrr se is soch mein dooba huwa tanha hoon mein

[dhump]

Bohot khoob janab.

naye dais ka rung naya tha
dharti sai akash mila tha

sochta hon pehli barish bhi mukamal kardon par phir kabhi sahi.

Alif

[ZAK]

Un say nain mila kay daikho
Yay dokha bhi kha kay daikho

Wow

[Momo]

Wo aaye ghar mein hamaare, khuda ki qudrat hai
Kabhi hum un ko kabhi apne ghar ko dekhte hain

Noon

[d0gers]

Originally Posted by ace4rmspace Yeh jo deewaaney se do chaar nazar aatey hain In mein kuch Sahib-e-Israar nazar aatey hain Noon

Ahem... *cough* post #37 *cough*.

[d0gers]

Na woh ishq mein rahin garmiyan na woh husn mein rahin shokhian
Na woh Ghaznavi mein tarap rahi na woh kham hay zulf-e-Ayaz mein

Noon

[Momo]

Nafas na anjuman-e-aarzoo se baahar khhench
Agar sharaab naheen, intazaar-e-saaghar khhench

Chay